You should have written this in the 70s…some of the classic rock bands of the time (which are still my favourite) would have surely taken your lyrics for one of their songs!
Manu
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“Like the wax sliding down a candle” … 🙂
I dunno what to say!! u have written it so welllll!!!
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loved the third para, cant say much, reading it made me nostalgic and surely left me emotional.
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And here come the winds of change,
Sweeping the roads of dried autumn-yellow leaves,
Paving the way for more to fall,
They don't.
For, these are the winds of change.
Eagerly waiting for more of you 🙂
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WOW. You write SO well pee 🙂 I'm eagerly waiting for more of YOU!
What you wrote reminded me of the song 'Wind of change' by The Scorpions:
“The future's in the air,
I can feel it everywhere,
Blowing with the wind of change.”
Colon phi 🙂
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Thank you Gagan ma'am! 🙂
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Very nice lines … but chinkooo why do u have to write such sadsie words … write similar words which make u feel … this world is beautiful!! 🙂
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Di, I DO write about things that make me feel that the world is beautiful. But I feel that all human emotions are important. Grief is very beautiful sometimes. It makes you feel the way you do when you're happy 🙂
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